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il tell you a story, a story of a girl, she lived a life of freedom, her own happy world.

She danced with the fairys and laughed with the demons, she listened to the ghost while they so mournfully sing

She sheltered herself from real feeling,and pain, could not hide the sun with the rain.

She lived her life in fantasys and fairytales, laughed when hurt was all she felt

She asked for no love, asked for no heart, asked for no reason to have a new start.

In her world,it was only black and white, good or bad...you were either happy, or you were sad

Soon enough, a man came who took her breath away, and in the black an white, came a shade of gray.

while her heart told her to leave with the stranger,in this fairytale world she only wished to linger.

How was she to know, that to her world, would come some dread, for soon she found his body, lifeless and dead

Her fairytales vanished, her demons disapeard...she was shoved into a world that she honestly feared.

She could not stop the flow of her tears, wishing only to touch the body so near.

As she lay down beside him, and ended her life, She wished silently that things were alright.

SO you see, in this story she was a foolish child, hiding from herself in a world beautiful and wild

Was her life as happy as some would think it to be? no...she was just a girl to blind to see...

(Please ignore all bad spelling)
©2004-2010 ~Pixe
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Its pretty much a story...lol

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:iconearthwindstar07:
wow...ignoring the spelling..its awsome i love your poems always!

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:iconlordofelves:
it's great. i loved it.

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"We will go through them like crap through a goose!"-George Patton
:iconfreeing-liberty:
Thats a very touching story. It feels like a fairy tale of sorts (Which is what i assume you went for). I like your little use of description to let us shape things for ourselves. ANd I dont mean to be sarcastic when I say that.

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